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1. Advance order of one (1) day is required.
2. Self-collection is available from 1 September to 6 October 2025 at Yan Ting, Level 1U of The St. Regis Singapore. Delivery is available between 11am to 8pm within Singapore only.
3. Valid for walk-in or online orders. Mooncakes are subject to availability, while stocks last.
4. For online purchases, bulk orders, or enquiries, please visit yanting.oddle.me, email festive.midautumn@stregis.com, or call +65 6506 6870 / 6506 6887.
5. Other terms and conditions apply.
6. Payment must be made with a valid DBS/POSB Credit or Debit Card.
7. DBS General Promotion Terms & Conditions apply, visit www.dbs.com.sg/dbscardstnc.

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